SeizureDog's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Awesome Grounds]

I COMPLTELY AGREE >:(

I watched all of those shitty awesome movies recently and didn't laugh once. They are completely retarded.

Of course, this Flash also sucks, but I'm giving it a 10 for the principle.

AshfordPride responds:

Yeah, sure, I'll take it.

[Jinas 1: A New Friend]

What a coincidence.

I barely come to Newgrounds anymore, so imagine my surprise to not only see an old favorite of mine submitting something new, but submitting something that I had already seen the beginnings of. I remember seeing the first half minute or so you did years ago. I can't believe that you're just now submitting this. Man, it's like time stood still and I never left.

Anyways, on to the Flash itself.

It's an impressive piece of work. Not very many people attempt something of this kind of scope and scale. For a while there I was thinking it might end up being as long as a normal TV episode. The storyline has a real Watership Down feel to it. Nothing amazingly original out of it yet, but it is just the pilot.

The animation quality I noticed various slightly. I think I can pick out scenes you animated a couple of years later than the rest. It seems like I suggested using the smooth function years ago, but doesn't look like you did :P Also, there's the slight issue of sudden stops in animated movement. You know, where the image is frozen as soon as the movement stops and looks jerky. It's a tricky thing to avoid, but if you can find a way to correct it then your animation quality will really improve.

These are just friendly little critiques though, on the whole, the Flash is awesome. Hopefully you're not planning on this being anything over a 3 part series, otherwise we might never see the ending ;)

AloneInTheDark responds:

Thanks pal. It is indeed tricky to avoid those jerky movement bits. Thing is that the drawings take up alot of memory, being pretty detailed, that even at medium quality it won't go 100% smooth. Only a fast 2ghz ram pc can run this on high quality and then the linework will also be smoother. You can try what it looks like then (press the toggle quality button twice) and the difference should be noticable.

[Experiment_04]

Absolutely LOVED it :D

This is one of the most stylish Flash that I have every seen Zekey. It completely made my day. Excellent excellent excellent.

P.S. HORSES HORSES HORSES

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

HORSES, YO

[Anti Anti Hentai Club]

Excellent, but irrelevent.

I myself am a (inactive) member of the AAHC and I must congratulate you on a very swell intro. However, I'm confused here. Are we running a video game club or a hentai one? I find it disappointing that there was not one single provocatively clad female out of the whole animation. I'm not even saying it has to be nudity, just bikini-ish or something. It really feels like it misses the point. If you hadn't have stated that it was for the AAHC there would be no possible way for me to guess which club it was representing.

Despite that, it is a very fun Flash to watch, and I love the music. Just try to get some actual hentai in next time.

Steven-M responds:

Awesome to hear from you again. And yes, I probably should have drawn some... only that I'd probably get several MORE people on my ass for doing the whole hentai thing. Anyway, thanks for the comments.

[Down At Juice Bar]

Ugh, sucked

The animation was severely lacking this time around. Bad Guys have never really been known for their amazing animation, but come on this one was just lazy. You could have (and probably did) through this together in about an hour. Additionally, the humor did nothing for me. I got the feeling that the jokes were fine, but that it was the delivery that failed to get it to me. You tested the waters, which is fine, but I really suggest not making anything along these lines again. Go back to your old formula.

ChrisNosal responds:

There's no way I could do the entire episode in an hour. I'm not sure if you just mean the animation? Even that I spent a few days on, but that's what the least work goes into, yeah.

But, as I stated somewhere else, I started writing this ep in late October. It's not like it's something I threw together over the weekend. I joke about being lazy, but I really do put effort into everything I do.

I'll be mixing aspects of the old formula with aspects of the new formula.