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[Boo!]

Wow

It's like...almost a sig :/

At least it was small.

[PICONJO CONFESSION 5]

Hurray for Piconjo :)

Go kill those...um. Weird ass monster things! XD

[Grandma got run over...]

Argh

You could have at least used the whole song >:(

Not too terrible for a first movie though I guess.

[Banned from ClockCrew]

Argh, bad clock movie

You used movie clips that would cut off suddenly for animation a lot. And the movie itself was lame and uninteresting.

I'm a clock supporter myself, but I didn't like this movie. Better luck next time.

[Peach The Bitch]

Boring :|

Yeah...Peach does some dudes. How original *rolls eyes*

This took you 3 months? You're awfully slow.

[Salad Fingers Episode 5]

Creepy as always

All of the salad fingers end suddenly, but this seemed to even more so.

Anyways, I still loved it. Excellent job.

[Piconjo brnz teh thief]

Cannibus! It's been a while

I havn't watched one of your movies in quite some time. Me has secretly missed them :'(

You forgot the 95% part of the preloader :P

Anything with Piconjo = <3
Anything with Foamy = H8

Isn't it customary to add Piconjo as a co-author?

Anyways, I loves it as always :) I'll give you straight 10s since its been a while. For old times sake ;)

Sir-CannabisClock responds:

I don't want to bother the all mighty piconjo with my movies, I'm sure he's busy sexoring many many many many women. but seriously, I'm sorry you missed my work, I havent been using the computer much anymore. I've been busy getting working a job, and going outside, unlike certain anonymous overated authors who will remain anonymous. anyways, thanks for the review, and the tens :D

[FOR EVERYONE]

Argh

Um, its not a real poem though. You see, poems need struture. Which this doesn't have. It's just some paragraphs thrown down. Still, that could have been forgiven if it had a rhyming pattern. But, it didn't have that either. (though not all poems have that, they do require stucture)

For example, it starts off with:

I stand beside my
window, and look at
the street below,
the wind is strong
again, will I die today...

At each break, you're suppose to pause. And if you read it like it's written, it doesn't sound right. Now, obviously you tried using commas instead of line breaks. But thats just wrong as well. You're suppose to use slashes (/) if you do it that way.

So, the correct version would either be

I stand beside my window,
And look at the street below.
The wind is strong again.
Will I die today?

or

I stand beside my
window/ and look at
the street below/
the wind is strong
again/ will I die today...

Do you see how the first one works so much better? Thats because it reads a hell of a lot easier.

Anyways, this was just a movie clip with a badly written tweened "poem". I'm not impressed.

That song bugged me throughout the movie, as I knew I had heard it before but couldn't place my finger on it.

evil-eternal-destiny responds:

wow really read into it...isnt a poem a expression of the person...so why does it need structure, its art nonetheless and art is not tamed or has rules...poetry is art... so ur trying to correct my art... plz if anything just relax in life... and just let others express themselves in their own ways and means but thanks for the rev anyways...you know i went to art school and you sound like alot of the kids that went there...never liked them...thanks anyways