Very nice improvment over the 1st
The plot has going to the point were it is much more interesting and the static in the voices wasn't AS bad, but could still be better. But geez, the monotone of the main character was extremely obvious in this one. He says things without any emotion at all. The other characters slightly had the same problem, but it wasn't aparent. You two need to learn how to sound like you're really talking, and not just reading from a script.